I promised once that I would post something I wrote.

by Moses Thu Dec 10, 2009 8:33 pm

So I will, here I guess. Song. Enjoy, don't, whatever. Just don't steal or anything I work hard on my crappy songs.

The Enemy is Me by Moses

Patch my soul with safety pins and iron on decals.
Like a pair of thrift store jeans.
Or that nap sack handed down to you from your sister.
Fix my holes.
Make me pretty and clean.

The rain fills the gutter of this house.
Overflows like it has someplace it needs to be.
Splashes the windows as if falls.
How I envy those drops.
So much perfection in their imperfection.

I'm trapped in a box.
One's personal prison.
My regret the walls.
Misdeeds the chains.
Resistence to change is the locks.

I drag me down.
I drag me down.
I've become too blind to see.
Too blind to see.
The enemy is me.

This house is as dark as a cave.
And thats how it feels, hiden deep in the earth.
Not yet seen in the world of man.
They wonder what beast could dewell inside.
But its just me.

I'm trapped in a box.
One's personal prison.
My regret the walls.
Misdeeds the chains.
Resistence to change is the locks.

I drag me down.
I drag me down.
I've become too blind to see.
Too blind to see.
The enemy is me.

I could tell you I'm gonna change this.
I'm gonna set it right.
But what can I change?
Tangled in the details.
Like it was a ball of twine.
Saddly it feel like this time around the hero dies.

I'm trapped in a box.
One's personal prison.
My regret the walls.
Misdeeds the chains.
Resistence to change is the locks.

I drag me down.
I drag me down.
I've become too blind to see.
Too blind to see.
The enemy is me.

by Falcon Thu Dec 10, 2009 8:37 pm

Yay. I'm glad you posted this oneAnd you have others you should share too!

by Pika Thu Dec 10, 2009 9:23 pm

nice lyrics. really cool. wow.

by [Mr_Self_Destruct] Fri Dec 11, 2009 6:58 am

[I found those lyrics exceptional, especially considering I have tried to express that very topic, but never could. I am a decent writer, a decent journalist but I am a terrible lyric writer, so its' nice to read lyrics like these to remind me to practice. I hope I can one day write lyrics as good as those. Plus clout MOsEs]

by Moses Fri Dec 11, 2009 12:43 pm

Thanks.

by Black Rock Lied Fri Dec 11, 2009 12:55 pm

awesome song moses ... if you want i know some people who could add music to this for you .... thats an IF YOU WANT

by [Mr_Self_Destruct] Fri Dec 11, 2009 2:03 pm

[I'm sure MOsEs would rather make music for it herself one day]

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